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Loyalty to sadness and despair
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:40:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Loyalty to sadness and despair
You pick dust from my eyes
Only to be replaced by filth and grime
Grabbing my bandaged wrists you cry
Falling to the dirt you sob
Leave me
I loathe you
I despise your every living being
I will kill you
I will kill you and
suffocate you and drown you
How dare you sob
You are always to blame
For my wretched feelings
Looking up I gaze into my eyes
And smash the mirror
Taking the shard glass
I slice my face over and over
Until I cant take the pain no more
Loyalty to sadness and despair
Once again
Copyright ©
williamdye
... [
2004-04-05 20:40:22]
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Re: Loyalty to sadness and despair
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:14:04 PM AEST
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| Nice! loved the part about smashing the mirror and cutting yourself... good write. |
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Re: Loyalty to sadness and despair
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:24:32 AM AEST
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Keep up the good work, I am mesmorized!!
I.P. Freely |
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