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Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:37:47 PM in AEST
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They wont last, they were your words,
Relationship advice, from you
Two years and months more, we're still on strong
But you, three years, three relationships,
Yet we wont last?,
When will you grow up, when will you realise
The world doesn’t rotate around you..
..God you changed so much
Even i dont know who you are
Im fed up, i just cant go on
What shall i do, tell you to go, leave me alone... no..
..no... for now ill just wait, for this one to fail
The problems arise, where will you run
I know, its me, what do i think, what would i do
Yet you dont take my advise, you do the opposite
Then wonder when the words heard again
So you break up, you feel so alone
You'll ring me to talk, because you know i will listen
Then ill be there, the shoulder to lean on
The friends thats the rock, who’s decaying inside
Wont show anyone, just show a small smile
As i become a mere shell, so hollow within
As you talk away the night, i sit there and i wait
Wait for the next stab, to enter my the heart.
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Re: Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:51:41 PM AEST
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This is your heart on a page sir....the honesty and pain gives me chills.
Barkeep, better just leave the bottle for my friend.
Larry |
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Re: Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
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by blueheart on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:52:45 PM AEST
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| You've clearly written all the emotions in your heart. Very honest and emotional. |
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Re: Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:56:24 AM AEST
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This poem reeks frustration and hurt. Very well expressed. I don't know what to say to help you but this is life *sigh* Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:53:20 AM AEST
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That was absolutely beautiful and tear jerking. I dont know whether I should smile because it was pure geniuous or to cry because its so sad. Either way Luke, this is exceptional. This is a true masterpiece of the soul
Lindsey |
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Re: Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
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by fallen_eyes on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:14:38 AM AEST
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hun,
you have him down to the very last dot of the very last line. It is exactly how he makes me feel also, i wish i knew how he changed or how we can stop him hurting us but for now we're both be hollow, until we can feel that hole. but remember no matter how stupid he now is, you will always have me
love ya loads
pickle XX |
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Re: Nuisance, Perturb, Vexation
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 12:55:02 PM AEST
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| sounds like some deep soul searching, lovely poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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