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The perfection of a by-gone second
Contributed by
jade_elephant
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Give me just one minute,
Before you have to go.
Please God, let this moment last,
Stop time, make it go t-w-i-c-e, a-s, s-l-o-w.
Grasping with desperate fingertips
At the very corner of your soul.
I’m bathing in what we have left,
Cause I know it won’t last long.
Why does it all have to end?
Why no stop button, no pause, no rewind?
Why the everlasting playing?
Too much time in which things can change.
I’m content in just this second,
I don’t want it to go away.
Fed up of going in circles
Of being left and dragged up again.
Content in just this second…
Which has gone just as it arrived,
Never to return the same,
Just a variation, on the utmost perfection,
Of our first meeting, first glance, before all this deception.
It will never be that good again.
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jade_elephant
... [
2004-04-05 17:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The perfection of a by-gone second
(User Rating: 1 ) by dolly_dagger on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:47:23 PM AEST (User
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interesting subject. it's weird how gets tainted like that. well conveyed. i relate.
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Re: The perfection of a by-gone second
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:13:16 PM AEST (User
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''grasping with desperate fingertips at the very corner of your soul''. wow i really can relate to this. a lot of ur poems some up an idea of my thoughts placed on paper. im lucky to know of the situation in which your'e in to truely understand the meanings of these poems...at least i hope i get the true just!! ur a very powerful writer and sum up emotions very well (and not just thru ur poetry!) lis xxx |
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Re: The perfection of a by-gone second
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken-glass on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:53:12 AM AEST (User
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Hmmmm, think I've guessed who this may be! I've just read through all your poems you have posted and I love them.. what can I say, you keep it locked up so tight! Yet another brilliant poet on this site, it's great to have you here. Love and light, Chris xxxxxx |
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