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Little too Late
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:08:00 PM in AEST
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Forever is lost,
i cant begin,
and all i can do is cry.
I dont know why,
but i cant describe,
the pain,
the unbreakable wall
i have built.
i seperate myself,
hoping it'll all get better,
as i watch my life go by.
It does not.
My world collapsed,
theres no where to hide,
i try to piece it together,
but its a little too late.
I dont know what to d,
i just sit and stare,
at that blank, ugly wall.
Now i cant cry,
i still dont know why,
but the world is gone,
and for me,
i'm a liitle too late.
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2004-04-05 16:08:00]
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Re: Little too Late
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by badlander on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:39:31 PM AEST
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| Sad but good. It's never too late for anything. If you want change, make it happen. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. |
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Re: Little too Late
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:30:16 PM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhhit is never too late my dear. Pull yourself up by your bootstraps.......and get out there even if you fear.
'tis fear that controls us all........so don't let it anymore.....don't be afraid to open your heart, and let the sunshine in, 'tis a dark and miserable place with the sun's rays.......go help another person.....will fulfill all your days
you won't even remember you felt so blue, and couldn't cry.......then you'll let out a sigh......that will help you too!
Great Write
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