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When the Sun Kisses the Sea
Contributed by
full_blur
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:02:37 PM in AEST
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Look forward to the moment
when dark and light collide
and kiss the crest of the sea.
In that single second,
see the sky of silken scarlet;
blood of the angels no less.
Open your wounds to the wind,
lay down an incomplete soul
and bow to the swing of the scythe
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Re: When the Sun Kisses the Sea
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:04:10 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Re: When the Sun Kisses the Sea
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:13:35 PM AEST
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| Ohhhhh sad! I was hoping for a happier ending! We are all wounded and incomplete... especially those of us churning verse, I think --- but --- alas! bowing is not for me! Nicely written though! |
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Re: When the Sun Kisses the Sea
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. Your imagery was great and the concept....very thought provoking!
Thanks so much for sharing!
Carol |
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