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Divorcees (a pantoum)
Contributed by
butterat_zool
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 02:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She never said it mattered that
he left his wings under her bed.
He wished she wasn’t mad at him,
but some things are best left unsaid.
He left his wings under her bed
and he’s forgotten how to fly,
but some things are best left unsaid.
He never meant to make her cry.
Now he’s forgotten how to fly.
He must have lost his little mind.
He never meant to make her cry,
but let the past be left behind.
He must have lost his little mind
when they split ways so long ago,
but let the past be left behind.
He’d like to take his wings to-go.
When they split ways so long ago,
they kissed, he wished her farewell and
he’d like to take his wings to-go,
he’s left them underneath her bed.
They kissed, he wished her farewell and
she never said it mattered that
he’s left them underneath her bed.
He wished she wasn’t mad at him.
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Re: Divorcees (a pantoum)
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:42:17 PM AEST
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| Well done, nicely written. |
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Re: Divorcees (a pantoum)
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:21:09 AM AEST
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I love the way you took a line from the last stanza (?) and inserted it into the next one. The theme of this write was an interesting one. A different way to look at things. I enjoyed reading this.
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