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Valentine
Contributed by
Piper
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 02:03:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I wish you were my Valentine
Though I may not be yours,
And I may, in my ignorance,
Be speaking to closed doors.
I have no inking of your heart,
No hint what you might say;
But when I think of you the sun
Will just not go away.
There is in you a loveliness
That makes my darkness shine,
And so I'll wait, if wait I must,
To be your Valentine.
Copyright ©
Piper
... [
2004-04-05 14:03:43]
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Re: Valentine
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:04:18 PM AEST
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This is gorgeous! absolutely fantastic.
I love it. So well stated.
"makes my darkness shine" is a genius line.
The line that tells all =)
Very well done Pipe =)
I hope they someday see how happy they could be with you.
Best of luck,
Ellen |
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Re: Valentine
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:11:22 PM AEST
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| Very romantic and wonderful to read. I hope you get your valentine and soon! Kie |
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Re: Valentine
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:55:04 PM AEST
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| Hey great poem about determination |
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Re: Valentine
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:50:37 PM AEST
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Welcome to your-poetry.com.... This is very sweet.. I loved it a lot.. Best of luck with your valentine...
Jenni |
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