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Care?
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:15:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Try so hard to make you proud,
But I just cant do it,
I'm just not allowed,
Because I am *****,
At everything I do
I should be locked in a cage,
Segregated at a zoo,
Taunted to be filled with rage,
And end up Just like you,
A ***** remorseless loser
Should I have stopped and hid,
When I stared into the eyes of my abuser,
I guess thats my fault, why I got hit,
For comming home late, what a confuser,
But hey I just dont give a *****,
AND NEITHER DO YOU,
Maybe you would,
Maybe you wouldnt,
But you'll never ***** know!
But what do you know,
Why should you ***** care,
Not even related...SO?
We make a team, We make a pair,
I can see it in your eyes
You ***** hate me,
My presence and all my lies,
Combined as this entity,
That you loath with no suprise,
I know you hate me,
But hey...
I just dont care
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-04-05 11:15:26]
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Re: Care?
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:41:15 AM AEST
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| wow, so full of anger...it really spits at you. this is great write..but im not sure i wanna be on the other end. stay great. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Care?
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:21:08 PM AEST
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WoW How The Anger Shows In This.... :-)
Makes Not To Self..... Not To Get On Your Bad Side LoL :-) Great Write
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Care?
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by mercedes on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:52:34 AM AEST
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| powerfully written, your feelings come thru. Great job. |
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