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Beauty of Darkness
Contributed by
silent
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:20:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In darkness there is a beauty that no-one understands
Hidden deep within your mind, reachable, yet unattainable, for here it lies, hidden from the world
Untouched by joy, unspoiled by bliss
Always searching, never really finding
yearning for darkness
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2004-04-05 07:20:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:29:14 AM AEST (User
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ohhhh...I liked that.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:04:09 AM AEST (User
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Oh, I like this. I know those recesses. They are so hard to describe, but you have introduced them with finesse. Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:25:27 AM AEST (User
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Ahhh I loved this. You described the beauty of darkness elegantly. |
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by alecfernadez on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:03:23 AM AEST (User
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thats incredible, Its amazing that you can describe such a broad word like 'darkness' in such a ... invigorating, original way
Just, Wow
Peace, Mazzl n' Respect |
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by mountainhigh on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:28:16 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem. The day light sky hides much, but the darkness of nights shows the universe, much as our minds show us as infinate.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:05:12 PM AEST (User
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amazing. i love the dark. and i loved this poem. well done.
Arden |
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:45:11 AM AEST (User
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i love this poem, and i agree, that dark little place has profound meaning at times:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: Beauty of Darkness
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:05:23 AM AEST (User
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Very nicely described. Good job. |
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