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A Fishy Poem
Contributed by
Rous
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:41:55 AM in AEST
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My son has a fish tank
Sitting on a ledge
One day, contemplating life
And stepping off the edge
I noticed baby guppies
Swimming ‘round and ‘round
Being chased by bigger fish
And a thought struck, so profound
My life is filled with chasing kids
They are never in one place
They only laugh and seem to thrive
On the joy of the chase
And just before the point when
Their little necks were rung
It suddenly occurred to me
I know why guppies eat their young
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Rous
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2004-04-05 06:41:55]
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Re: A Fishy Poem
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by AliB on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:04:17 AM AEST
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Lol, liked this. Not sure I'd want to eat mine but they certainly drive me up the wall sometimes, love em!!
Ali xx |
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Re: A Fishy Poem
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by Rous on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:57:24 AM AEST
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| I understand. I would not want to eat mine either, at least not without a LOT of catsup, and I do not even like the stuff. Could you just imagine, though if you were a fish and had to chase dozens, if not hundreds of kids around all day? I would be living in that little castle in the bottom of the tank, with all the doors and windows locked. LOL |
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Re: A Fishy Poem
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:29:27 AM AEST
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| Hillarious and witty. Absolutely adored this poem. Well done.... Kie |
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Re: A Fishy Poem
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:26:48 PM AEST
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I didn't ever want to eat mine, but I sure did want to pinch their little heads off their shoulders a few times. They survived and so did I and eventually they grew up and left, lol. So now we are the best of friends. Now, the grandchildren can do anything and it doesn't bother me. Do you find that strange?????
Rita |
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Re: A Fishy Poem
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by Rous on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:33:54 PM AEST
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| Nope, do not find it strange at all. I am good friends with my girls. Of course, they are out of the house. I still struggle with the boys. Only six more years. |
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Re: A Fishy Poem
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by skinsfan on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:13:42 PM AEST
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| Funny stuff. Nice smooth flow.-skinsfan |
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