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Room
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:20:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Reflection of the womb
Forgotten peace
Unfolded in
A scarlet universe
Give me some room
Surround me
As darkness slips in
On lagging feet
Warm embrace
Soft rocking
That smothers me
My eyes closed
The clock chimes twelve
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-04-05 03:20:53]
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Re: Room
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:46:54 AM AEST
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that feeling of warmth and security you just can't beat it! well written.
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Re: Room
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by bernard on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:41:44 AM AEST
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Delightful poem of a lost place of security that is unique in itself.
Thanks for the read.
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Re: Room
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by Menelaus on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:45:11 AM AEST
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"Life, be sweet. Death, be gentle.
Mind, be silent." |
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Re: Room
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:58:53 PM AEST
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Nice work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Room
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by SunshineBananas17 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 10:14:59 PM AEST
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I love the subtlety and warmth in this(:
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