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Irrational Highs, Crazy Downs.
Contributed by
0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life has its ups and downs,
The ups create excitement, happiness, an overall glow to a person,
The downs drive you crazy, like you are bogged in a hole, that’s impossible to get out of.
My highs drive me crazy, with impulsive irrational ideas,
Impossible goals and hideous plans of success,
I thrive on my downs, to keep me safe from those insane thoughts that run so freely through my mind, at a hundred miles p/h,
I grasp the sides of this hole that traps me inside,
My body will not obey my order to pull my weight to the surface,
So that I may reach the air that I so desperately need to breath,
Before I am once again plunged back into deranged ideas of freedom,
Freedom from myself.
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0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
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2004-04-04 22:17:47]
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Re: Irrational Highs, Crazy Downs.
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by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:32:17 PM AEST
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| My mother was bi-polar. She led a life that is not so easily traveled. It was cancer that killed her but she never had it easy. I was her rock sometimes when she needed one. Just remember don't let this ilness define you. You are more then it by an infinity. |
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Re: Irrational Highs, Crazy Downs.
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:43:09 AM AEST
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I am bi-polar as well and can totally relate to what you write about. I like how u describe it so well that was very good. Truly a talented poem if u ever need advice and feel that your disorder is pulling u down feel free to PM me. Once again a good poem.
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