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School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:03:57 PM in AEST
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Common characteristics under a hard shell
Quietly wishing for an end to this hell
Fruitless effort spread out for miles
Threaded and measured change of styles.
Timid responses sweep past my lips
The poison I fed she sweetly sips
Time of death, underdeveloped state of mind
To look in my eyes and find the killing kind.
Disposable hunger keen to toss
When all is through we mourn the loss
Commitment uncovered without delay
Every bully born to repay.
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:46:10 PM AEST
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| great work and good rhyme. I was bullied in school also but if it is any help. All the bullies back then are bums and losers now. Revange is sweet tasted ten years later. They shall make their lives as such, trust me it never fails |
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:09:00 AM AEST
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| Very powerful poem and it's true. Bullying over here has gone to the extent of murder and I think it's all really stupid. Bullies gain nothing by picking on others. |
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:18:40 AM AEST
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I was never really bullied in school but an aquaintence of mine was murdered a few years ago by people at school so this hits pretty close to home for me.
Amazingly well written, great imagry.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:16:07 AM AEST
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| Powerful poem with great R&R ... hopefully every bully will get his just desserts in the end ... what goes around comes around ... Jan |
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by AliB on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:59:09 AM AEST
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Great poem, I was bullied for the last 3 years of senior school and it still affects me sometimes now, 17 years later!! I hope all bullies have crummy lives and experience it themselves.
Ali xx |
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:15:51 AM AEST
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I hate to spout cliches but it's true--you reap what you sow. And unjust mistreatment of others will boomerang on those foolish enough to partake in such acts of cowardice.
Excellent poem, of course. Strong technically, everything fits together nicely. Although I think there's a bit more to this poem than what meets the eye...
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by ConfusedPancake on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:51:13 PM AEST
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| excellent write. the title is what really drew me in and then the poem itself was just outstanding. i applaud you. |
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Re: School Yard Bully and the Nerds Revenge
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:33:16 AM AEST
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Powerful, emotional, and well written. Well done
Love Dawny x |
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