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Masters Hand
Contributed by
justinblue
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Like a puzzle my life came put together
Then it got tore apart
But like a puzzle
It all fit back together
With the touch of a master's hand
Like a heater warms your body
In the cold chilly months of winter
God will warm and soothe
Your icey aching heart
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2004-04-04 21:44:28]
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Re: Masters Hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:00:03 PM AEST
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| Nice use of symbolism towards clarity |
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Re: Masters Hand
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:31:03 AM AEST
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| Agreed, I loved the symbolism you used here, I hope that it all rings true for everyone. |
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