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Expiration Date
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:59:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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YOu pull and peel me away
Exeeding limits of my own
Ive kept with you to this day
But today you stand alone
These wounds I cant conceal
They runtoo deep and are too real
Your attempts arrive too late
Cuts you've made me will not heal
My time has come to cope with fate
Synchronize with hope and wait
Watch me fall between the cracks youve made
To find and reach my expiration date
you used to hold me with all your might
Love that bound me in one piece
Cure and feed my appetite
Hunger that wont ever cease
The strength you gave began to wither
Creating these black holes within me
These wounds I cant conceal
They runtoo deep and are too real
Your attempts arrive too late
Cuts you've made me will not heal
My time has come to cope with fate
Synchronize with hope and wait
Watch me fall between the cracks youve made
To find and reach my expiration date
Cast away my remains in the fire
See me burn to ashes and expire
Times before I have risen
And now I shall begin again
Although my body shall begin to fade
My spirit will never die
Restore my body anew and remade
Let my soul free to fly~
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-04-04 20:59:56]
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Re: Expiration Date
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:06:08 PM AEST
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you continually amaze me although I think I should cease to be amazed and just come to expect great poetry by you. Anywho an amazing poem that showcases your talent.
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Re: Expiration Date
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:18:18 PM AEST
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| Amazing piece of poetry. You continue to captivate me with your writes. |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:04:04 PM AEST
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| Powerful and fresh. I like your intential use of word runs like runtoo. Is places the right concert of stress when reading |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:50:09 PM AEST
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Very Powerful Write :-) I Love It... You Amaze Me With Your Great Talent....Please Keep Em Coming :-)
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by silent on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:53:56 AM AEST
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Such an impactful poem, your dark poetry really touches me, i love reading them. "See me burn to ashes and expire", wickedly expressed. Keep it up
silent |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by ConfusedPancake on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:35:31 PM AEST
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wow. truly wonderful. very dark and very vibrant. much to my liking. i especially like the opening "You pull and peel me away
Exeeding limits of my own
Ive kept with you to this day
But today you stand alone"...and the repeating "chorus" if you will. such a good poem. so much depth. |
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