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Once More
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I see you.
You see me.
We smile.
I step closer.
You open your arms.
We embrace.
I close my eyes.
Your heart beats.
We sigh.
I tell you I love you.
You whisper the same.
We know.
I feel weak.
You trace my neck.
We kiss.
I melt.
You make me crazy.
We love.
I must go.
You whimper.
We part.
I resist.
You look back.
We're alone.
I daydream.
You muse.
We can't wait to...
...Repeat
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liquidsunshine
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2004-04-04 18:06:57]
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Re: Once More
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by Zexen on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:23:35 PM AEST
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| it was so moving, i could feel the pain and anguish in those words. |
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Re: Once More
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:44:50 PM AEST
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What a beautiful way to write and display the love you feel.
Excellent poem, beautifully written. I enjoyed it so much. |
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Re: Once More
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:19:06 AM AEST
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Aww how sweet. Though I think it comes off with a little too much of a mechanical, robotic sound for the content. But maybe that's just me.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Once More
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by silent on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:35:07 AM AEST
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Now that one brought a smile to my face, love the style, nice little ending repeat.....
So very true.
Silent |
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Re: Once More
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by JoAnne_Buchanan on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:28:44 PM AEST
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Lovely and powerful!!!
love
joanne buchanan |
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Re: Once More
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:17:05 PM AEST
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Eloquently painted picture. Excellent job.
Andrew |
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