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Passion
Contributed by
monkey
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:44:12 PM in AEST
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my true passion
is on the volleyball court
running around
with my heart
pounding
against my chest
the world around me
melts away
and the cheering
of the fans
fall away
the only thing
I notice
are my team-mates
and the ball
whether we win
or lose
we're a team
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-04-04 17:44:12]
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Re: Passion
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:15:31 PM AEST
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Simply put.
Keep writing about your passion.
love,
Liquidsunshine
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Re: Passion
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:36:40 PM AEST
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Excellent write, a very positive poem.
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Re: Passion
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by jamsters on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:55:42 PM AEST
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ur good at volleyball
i bet u r so happy rachel quit and shes not on ur team anymore (she's my friend so dont tell her im not) but i like ur peom a lot...my peoms r too violent...i tried to write a non-violent one before when i was talkin to drew...but failed(tear) it was bout this puupy that kept barking, so barked at it, and then it got really annoying, so i went into graphic detail about killing that puppy! i can dance like the black chicks on mtv:D!!!
8-)
but anyways ur peoms is awsome
keep it up my main homie G in the hood, if ya know what im sayin dawg. word up dude?
gasta talk!
lylas
your violentest friend
jamie jo |
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