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¤ Forgive Me ¤
Contributed by
monkey
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*
a simple question
a simple word answered,
broke your heart
and you turned away,
breaking my heart
years
of friendship,
shattered,
like fragile glass,
with only one word
"no"
which I broke two hearts
by saying
you
were always there;
when I needed you,
protecting me,
watching me,
and never resting
until I was safe
tears glide
down my face
everytime I'm
backstabbed
now Im frightened
by what I see,
by what you've sheltered me from
all these years
the pain,
the lies,
the betrayal
I wish
you were here
to shield me
and catch me
as I fall
I wish
you were here
to say its all over now
but instead
I'm hurled
into a life
I want no part of
theres too much
that time can't erase
I crave
your protection
I miss you
I'm sorry
please forgive me
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Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-04-04 17:19:35]
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Re: ¤ Forgive Me ¤
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:09:24 AM AEST
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"theres too much
that time can't erase"
Hehehe that sounds familiar... a little Evanescence, anyone? ;)
I enjoyed the poem. Normally I'd say it could've been organized better, but in this case, I think it adds to the emotional turmoil within the words. Great write!
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Re: ¤ Forgive Me ¤
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:09:04 PM AEST
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| sometimes even forgiveness cant erase the guilt kept. |
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