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Last Thoughts
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:16:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She sits alone,
And cries at home,
Waiting for a call.
While she waits,
She lights one up,
And takes a heavy drawl.
Hours slowly pass,
She silently asks ‘why?’
As she leans against the wall.
She climbs the stairs,
Grasping the banister,
Afraid she might fall.
She climbs the balcony,
And removes her shoes,
As she stands up tall.
She throws herself off,
And her last thought is,
‘Why live at all?’
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quilted_rag_doll
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2004-04-04 17:16:39]
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Re: Last Thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by badlander on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:57:59 PM AEST
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| OWWW!! Good stuff,just don't do it!! |
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Re: Last Thoughts
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:06:02 AM AEST
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Whoa! What an ending! After the line about her standing up tall, I didn't expect that. Good job!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Last Thoughts
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:56:15 AM AEST
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I loved it great write!!! awesome job!!
Lots of Love
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