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HATE
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i hate you, i hate myself,
And the man nextdoor.
I hate your mom, i hate my dad,
And the first-floor whore.
I hate your life, i hate mine,
And our constant war.
i hate your mind, i hate my heart,
And our love that is no more.
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2004-04-04 17:13:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: HATE
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:03:27 AM AEST (User
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I like the first-floor whore line. Very original. Overall, short but to the point. Good write.
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