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Spring Bloomings
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 02:44:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Winters frozen ice unthaws
Blankets of snow melt away to reveal blades of frozen grass
The world is no longer an ice cube
The temperature rises steadily
The once concealed sun
Now shines upon the land
birds let out their lovely tunes
Calling beautiful flowers out of their shells
Blooming into flamboyant colors
And swaying softly in the wind
Once cold dead trees
Now alive and bustling in the sun
Grass now moist and lush
Starts to sprout out among the garden
Wind blowing on the tree branches
Teasing them to a dance
And old theme of pale white
Now filled with shades of greens
Wonderful feelings of joy and happiness
Return once again
Rain clouds spread over the clear blue sky
Rumbling as they make their path
Rolling over top of each other
Forming an endless dark blanket over the sky
A vicious storm is brewing
Consuming the world below
Lightening letting out a piercing cackle
Hitting the ground like giant cannon balls
Leaving the earth quivering beneath it
Thunder bellowing out into the atmosphere
And only a moment later rain is pouring and pounding viciously down
Smacking the earth with great force
The storm continues
Flooding the streets and gutters
Plants hastily drink the soothing water
Pleasurably quenching their thirst
The storm has done its job
As it recedes just as it had come
Revealing the magnificent sun
Shining in the clear blue sky once again
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Soulless
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2004-04-04 14:44:42]
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Re: Spring Bloomings
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 02:58:41 PM AEST
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Me too!! Nicely done my friend, great imagery.
Very well done
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Re: Spring Bloomings
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by silent on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:39:44 PM AEST
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Very very good, you put it into perspective quite well, along the same lines as larry said, breathtaking imagey. Wonderful
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Re: Spring Bloomings
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:47:58 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery, yet another masterpiece.
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Re: Spring Bloomings
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:44:50 PM AEST
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| Wonderful imagery. I loved the way you expressed the beauty of spring. Beautiful poem. |
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Re: Spring Bloomings
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:54:27 PM AEST
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truely one of the most vivid poems ive read in quite a long while, amazingly beautiful, calming and delightful:) hugs n' love nessa
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