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Dreams
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 02:31:10 PM in AEST
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Demolishing all thats real and true
In hope of a hidden world
Come find me in the winter's dream
Look deeper beyond the surface
Follow my endless scream
Dont be fooled by its harmless appearance
Search for me in the white forest
Stand in resistance of this curse
For its evil will never rest
Deep within lay my dreams
In my world of white lies the black
Once it had been found
I could never reset back
Here I stray upon the hell I created
Consuming my majestic dreams of white
The hope I had is now faded
I stay kept away from light
Imprisoned in my own fantasy
Lost in the hidden lair below
I pray you find me
Buried deep beneath the gleaming snow
Trapped under the freezing barrier
Dig briskly
Dont stop for the visions become scarier
Free me quickly
Although I've been found
The fact still remains
I will stay lost here with you
Eternally locked away from the real world
For here is a hell passing s a dream
Its secret stays hidden
Within me it lives on
A force I can never ridden
In dreams you never die
My love we stay here forever
And forever we shall endure
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-04-04 14:31:10]
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Re: Dreams
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 07:58:44 PM AEST
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Whoa, nice . . . talk about vivid imagery!
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Re: Dreams
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by JadedExistence on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:27:54 PM AEST
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This is great. I don't think I have ever read a poem about dreams and being in a dream world. I love it, very vivid.
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Re: Dreams
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:45:57 PM AEST
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very good poem, very well written, and creative. I didn't think it was that long, but thats ok. keep up the writing.
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Re: Dreams
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by blueheart on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:16:56 PM AEST
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| Nice, ver nice. I love your writing style. A very unique poem. |
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Re: Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:04:05 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, but so sad, to be locked within a dream as the only place to meet ones love, *sniff sniff* although i may not be reading it right ...this is truely special, and makes much sense to me one a personal level, hugs n' love nessa
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