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too long
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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its been awhile
since ive enjoyed the sun
since i was excited about tomorrow
since i was excited about yesterday
Im figuring out how to turn around
how to start over
its been too long
since ive felt her touch
a feeling i miss a little too much
its been too long
since ive felt the wind hit my face
theres been too much
rain pouring down on my back
too much pain
and too much looking back
too much thinking
and too many drugs
and not nearly enough hugs
more questioning than anything
never knowing what pain
the next day will bring
i hope soon i find which way is up
and i have the courage to never give up
Copyright ©
wil_ca
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2002-09-23 19:20:00]
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Re: too long
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 01:52:39 PM AEST
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| Can never ever get too many hugs....don't give up!! |
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Re: too long
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by rustygrl33 on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:30:06 PM AEST
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| good write- i like it |
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Re: too long
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by banjo on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:17:25 PM AEST
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| the random rhyme is distracting. make a decision. |
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