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oh the irony.
Contributed by
jade_elephant
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:58:48 AM in AEST
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I’m never going to speak your words like some freak marionette.
Nor keep everything so short and sweet,
So tidy and neat
Become your idyllic,
The perfect accessory.
But oh the things you never know
I hold dark secrets far below
the surface hiding.
I’ve kept them locked away.
You’ve had your fun, now this is mine,
Timing all wrong,
Morally wrong,
It will never remain unknown,
But still I continue my fun.
A tangle of lies and deception, you dragged me in and showed me the thrill
Backfiring horribly, to turn
When you were the liar, you the bad guy
Have yet to learn, that I, am never always so… transparent?
Bad boy never realised the bad girl, and went searching away from home.
Leaving an empty, unhappy, yearning house.
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jade_elephant
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2004-04-04 09:58:48]
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Re: oh the irony.
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:04:57 AM AEST
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| After reading this twice I am still not completely sure what this is about. But I do know that it was written well and you are talented. It eludes to maybe problems with a guy? Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Kie |
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Re: oh the irony.
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by dolly_dagger on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:45:19 PM AEST
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wow, u have such an amazing way with words, babes. and Kie, i only know what she's talking about coz i know her lol!
i love this poem, it does a pretty good job of showing how annoyingly(yet admirably) deep and mysterious u can b! love u 2 bits
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