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Hollow
Contributed by
little_genna
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:07:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sat staring,
Not really caring.
Should never of happened,
But I was beckoned.
By your soft touch,
It was too much.
Lost control,
Became whole.
Never want to let go,
Shall become hollow.
All I want is you,
You just seem too far out of view.
To have your touch once more
Would be a sacred cure.
Not worth living without my special person,
Bring me my coffin.
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2004-04-04 09:07:30]
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Re: Hollow
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:09:37 AM AEST
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| I certainly can relate to this one. I've had a broken heart and yearned for 5 years to have that special person back. I was like a hollow zombie but with time it has gotten easier. Don't give up, just hang in there, okay? Kie |
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Re: Hollow
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by SmurfettOfPoems on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:37:00 AM AEST
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| Amazing work, im speechless by how you can connect to such a thing without personal experience. Keep up your awesome work! :) - smurfett |
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Re: Hollow
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:40:34 PM AEST
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ok so yeah i have to admit there is slight personal feeling to this but not as you would think. its not that i lost someone its that i cant have that someone. i do have someone special but a friend of my mine i wish was 'my special person'. then again looking at it he is my 'special person' because he is one of my closest male friends who i can always count on. i guess this is the meaning behind the whole poem.
well guys and girls enjoy and relate to it as you see fit!
love and hugs
XgenX |
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