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Hand Held Hate
Contributed by
Sweet-Poison
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:17:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You're so beautiful,
So fatal, Fake,
Yet so real to them,
Those who chose to celebrate your power,
Those who fall at our command.
My sweet little revenge,
We’ll steal it together,
We’ll teach them,
Those who doubt you,
Those whom we will victimise.
My anonymous hand held hate,
Tightened fingers around your neck,
See them choke,
Watch with me,
They will never laugh again.
My soulless perfection,
A rip in your flesh,
Watch it drip from them,
Sweetest revenge,
With a guilty smile,
No, They wont doubt me again.
My guardian angel,
Protect me from their laughter,
Their taunting,
We’ll show them,
Together, From here,
They will never know.
Copyright ©
Sweet-Poison
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2004-04-04 08:17:47]
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Re: Hand Held Hate
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by spider on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:18:57 AM AEST
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| it doesn't suck! kinda describes 'the popular people' at my skule |
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Re: Hand Held Hate
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:44:03 AM AEST
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| I have to also say that it does NOT suck. It is dark and could be interpreted many ways but it is excellently written... Kie |
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Re: Hand Held Hate
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by bernard on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:20:32 PM AEST
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| The poem is so realistic it impressed me with its simplicity in realising a picture of hate. Thanks from bernard. |
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Re: Hand Held Hate
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by whisper-of-night on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:55:58 PM AEST
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| Ooooohh dear! If the person who give you that birthday present finds out what purpose you put it into, he/she will be soooooo 'Oops' and 'Err-oh'!'^_^.....Hehehe, just kidding, the poem is actually quite good! Keep more coming! |
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