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From the Depths of my Broken Heart
Contributed by
silent
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:02:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Last night as i read your message to me
I was so destroyed, you could not see
The pain you caused, tears flowing within
Alone once again discarded like a tin
Gave you my soul, my life and my heart
Now broken and shattered for it tore me apart
I cannot stand to be alone again
For the first time i cried, looking at the frame
Of all i have lost, and oh what a cost
This price is one i cannot pay, have not the money, the will nor the way
On this paper is my final write
Leave me alone, to hide out of sight
This poem, i write with bloodied ink
My loneliness following me to the very brink
For all those that hurt me i thank in this write
Tomorrow i will be just a memory, out of sight
Out of mind, out of life
Thank you from the depths of my broken heart
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-04 05:02:13]
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:58:06 AM AEST
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Good Write...Although Sad...
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:11:51 AM AEST
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you leave not alone this night, bitterness and shame all that I have, I give to you this no other but you. A wish and a prayer, for you to find, happiness and light where ever you go, and may you always find time to write as you do, you see it pleases many, as you do too.
thank you. |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:38:07 AM AEST
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Silence is golden, bitterness brief, time is the measure, and the dawn is new. I offer a hand, I offer to you.
I like your work, may you write more, please. |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:50:41 AM AEST
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No, no, no, u can't do that!
Your pen is too powerfull to fall by the wayside!
Your pen is your weapon to rise above anything hurt can bring.
We all get tired sometimes and have to rest but never give up!
Alone at times isn't so bad.
Shine thru your pen!
U have great talent on loan from God.
rise up and stand for luvs sake.
luv, huggs, prayers, rainbows,
emy |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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"The man who, in a fit despair killed himself today, would have wished to live had he waited a week." -Voltaire
There is so much pain and longing for healing in this poem, I truly hope that you find it. |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:15:47 AM AEST
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wow i can relate to this so much.. your writes are indeed like mine.. i hope this wont be your last poem though..
great poem..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:59:45 AM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes. Memories of the past and being there. It hurts so much. I never thought this day would come for me that I would begin to live again. I hope the same thing happens to you. A truly sad and touching poem. Kie |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:40:35 PM AEST
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This is brilliant in its agony...
very well done
Larry |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:24:20 AM AEST
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| I truly hope this won't be your last write ... poetry is a gift and it can be a wonderful healer when a heart is broken ... excellent write ... Jan |
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Re: From the Depths of my Broken Heart
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by arden on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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oh my god. just so sad and full of emotion. the way it is written was just so good. truely a great write. loved this
Arden |
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