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Beyond Another Realm
Contributed by
jaeann
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So innocent and very young
in the ways of this world
already a woman
but still such a little girl.
Bated breath for the waiting
a haunted cross to bear
traveled the bridge from her forest
to reach for someone who cared.
Freeing oneself through empowerment
a journey aided by his love
life started then .......just for her
and their passions flew like the doves.
Her walk into the path of sunshine
tears flowing as he cleansed her soul
brought her the love she'd needed
and wickedly made her whole.
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jaeann
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2004-04-04 04:02:28]
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Re: Beyond Another Realm
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:45:50 PM AEST
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Soft and beautiful, with a hint of the sensual.....very well done :o)
Roses
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Re: Beyond Another Realm
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:46:27 PM AEST
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Jaymee,
I really enjoyed this one. I could even understand......few words but plain to see....
A young girl searching and found was she!
And now with son gone.......it will last for lifetime, that's for sure!
Sad, rather haunting, but with alittle sunshine!
I really like this one Jayme
love you
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Re: Beyond Another Realm
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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you forest dwellers make very good poets! well done.
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