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Not having you by my side
Contributed by
Soulpoetry
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:35:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like the wind that brushes your hair,
like the bushes that give us air. So natural and sweet,
this is how you made me feel.
One side of me says that I shall die for loving you;
for the way I hide my feelings and the way I cry for you.
Everything reminds me of you.
The times we passed together,
the things that we would do.
You were like a shadow that stood there by my side.
Now our love is shallow;
stranded without hopes of getting you back.
No madness is taking over my mind.
The onlyfeeling is the sadness of not having you
by my side.
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Soulpoetry
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2004-04-03 19:35:31]
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Re: Not having you by my side
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:38:06 PM AEST
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Ohhh.... I hope you feel better. This is such a sad one..... Beautifully written, but still, makes me sad just thinking about it.....
Brighter days,
Ellen |
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Re: Not having you by my side
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:17:33 PM AEST
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Re: Not having you by my side (User Rating: 1)
by TeeJay on Saturday, April 03 2004 @ 20:14:19 CST
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This is very heartfelt ... You've expressed the pain of losing a love so well, I felt it ...
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Re: Not having you by my side
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by Soulpoetry on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:28:10 PM AEST
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| Thak you for your feedbacks please visit my new website www.soulpoetry.cjb.net |
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Re: Not having you by my side
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:30:23 AM AEST
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| Love possessed and love lost...you captured the feeling so beautifully, great write. |
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Re: Not having you by my side
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:32:59 PM AEST
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| powerful write. well written =] |
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