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Heartless
Contributed by
little_genna
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:47:25 PM in AEST
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Black gapping hole where my heart should be,
No remorse, no emotion to see,
All that needs to be is life.
Taken by the single blade of a knife.
You could give that one thing that’s needed,
But no, you’re just clouded.
Out of view, out of grasp
I have no clasp.
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little_genna
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2004-04-03 16:47:25]
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Re: Heartless
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:59:45 PM AEST
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short but to the point, yes...i liked the frankness of this poem and how the delivery hits you right between the eyes...great job!
Faith : ) |
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Re: Heartless
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:47:10 PM AEST
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Being a man "heartless" it seems
I think your words does hit the mark
they desribe in eerie paradigms
the heartless conditions that I disembark
Dark but descriptive write!
I personally like these kinds of things...dark deeds await!.. hearken to me fellows in living death! ha ha ha
anyway good write! |
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Re: Heartless
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:44:54 PM AEST
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Wow! Very well written poem! Bitter yes but I really liked it! The shortness really fits to this poem, no other words can make the poem better because it's already great! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Heartless
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:46:57 PM AEST
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| You are a very good writer. Keep up the good work.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Heartless
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by Mihiri on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:49:38 AM AEST
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Very expressive! Well done,Keep it up!
Mihiri |
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