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This, that, and the other
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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your the salt of my tears
and the ink in my pen
each word,
each drop,
each down to you,
as they lay, scattered,
your running down this page
for you are all
but nothing
and everything combined
Copyright ©
ZooYork_Chick
... [
2004-04-03 14:45:54]
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Re: This, that, and the other
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:50:55 PM AEST
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Emotions running rampant in so few words. Excellent work.
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Re: This, that, and the other
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:58:13 PM AEST
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Just thought flow. I love to read and write poetic thought flow. Well done. Bravo.
love,
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Re: This, that, and the other
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by Broken-glass on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 03:07:40 PM AEST
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| Something I really liked about this, neat. Broken-glass |
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Re: This, that, and the other
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:45:53 PM AEST
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nice. i've felt like this before but it's kinda been expressed in different ways
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