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Our time apart
Contributed by
Dany
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This time apart,
how much it dose hurt.
And crying I start,
to remember ur kiss.
How will I go on,
When u r not here.
I lay on the lawn,
Wishing u were here.
I start to tremble,
My surroundings are blurred.
I now see u,
More butiful than a bird.
My love for u,
will ever go on.
Until the day,
death takes me and im gone.
I'll love u forever,
now this is no lie.
my love will continue,
Even after I die.
Copyright ©
Dany
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2004-04-03 13:11:48]
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Re: Our time apart
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by veruca on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:27:42 PM AEST
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I loved this one a lot too!!!!!! It's like I can feel your feelings..... kiss kiss,
veruca |
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Re: Our time apart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 03:40:56 PM AEST
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| I know you'll hold on to that one, lets just hope she holds on to you. |
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Re: Our time apart
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:28:52 PM AEST
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hi!!!!
awww this is such a sweet poem!!!
ill love you always!!!
TwEeKy
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