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I Want A Change
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 03:41:16 AM in AEST
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Sitting quiet by her Window
she types out theses humble Words
Dreaming of a Lover , Ambitions, Friends
Long Gone it seemed
And How It Is
And Where She is Now.
"Good job", she thought.
but just like all the rest
She was pushed to her limits
and put to the test!!
However ,
She beening a more Calmer,
Level Headed Person
Put thoughts to Pen and Drafted a Letter.
"To whom it my Concern.."
I have here a letter signed by Myself
and with billions of Names
We got a bone to pick with ya.
Now We Demand SOMEONE Up There
Pull up a Chair !"
?????..Huddle, Huddle !!!!#@%^&*(%$! ..
"We'LL be right with ya."
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Her fingers flew across those keys like ,Words were in her Fingers.
But she knew what She was Doing
all the same.
Just a Women by her window ,
Who's Just Empties Her mind ,
and giving the World a piece of it
For A Change.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2004-04-03 03:41:16]
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Re: I Want A Change
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:51:49 AM AEST
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| Well that's certainly different from most poems I've read on this site..not sure I truly understand its content, but it was nice to read all the same. |
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Re: I Want A Change
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:08:08 PM AEST
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Now We Demand SOMEONE Up There
Pull up a Chair !"
i take from this your asking god to listen?
I like the thought behind this, and as for an empty mind sums me up perfectly!
excellent
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Re: I Want A Change
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by JoAnne_Buchanan on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:05:12 PM AEST
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Wonderful descriptions here..Powerful and moving..
love
joanne buchanan |
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Re: I Want A Change
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:10:48 AM AEST
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Oh, good for you for taking the stand. We all sit on our hands and zip our lips till sometimes I think I am going to explode keeping it all inside. This is very similar to what I do. I just pour my feelings into my writing. Some never will be posted for that fact, but it got it out where I could see it in black and white and deal with it in a more calm manner. Bravo for you, I say.
Rita |
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