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Adventure
Contributed by
TheBearPaw
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:22:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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He thought it an adventure
I could see it in his eyes
That longing for some closeness
As I stripped my day disquise.
His anticipation growing
As I climbed into our bed
He rolled back the covers
smoothed the sheets, silken red.
The moment he had waited for
Had come to him sublime
He pulled the covers over my head
And trapped his fart inside.
(c)Carolyn Red Bear, 2003
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TheBearPaw
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2004-04-03 01:22:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Adventure
(User Rating: 1 ) by Justalady on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 09:55:13 AM AEST (User
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How dare you go from sensual to "just plain bad!" I am still smiling so perhaps some would say..... I have no class.... no matter, it moved me in more ways than one. :) Justalady |
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