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Breathless
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
on
Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I hide myself from you
You pretend not to see me
Not much to look at
But that's beside the point
I can't help but stare
Look right through you
Feel you without touch
I explode inside
And melt into nothing
You look away
And forget tot breath
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2002-09-23 07:30:00]
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Re: Breathless
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 03:04:15 PM AEST
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I don't see this as silly
It's deep, short, and simple
I enjoyed this, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Breathless
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 12:28:09 PM AEST
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| I don't think this is silly at all. I love short poems that say alot. I really like it alot. |
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