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Our Red, White, And Blue
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:23:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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What is this world we come to know
To me it's nothing but a freak show
Children sleeping in the streets,
Without a dime to their name
And nothing to eat.
Fathers raping daughters'
And priests are out of order
This is certainly not,
What the doctor had ordered
Countries going to war
Soon our world will be know more
Politicians are raising taxes,
While the poor are busting their *****
Gang members in the streets,
Killing one another
Why can't we all get along,
And help thy brother
The national anthem is being
Pulled from schools
This makes me wonder
Is this country run by fools'
People driving intoxicated,
Killing others
Because they over accelerated
Children can't even play video games,
Cause they're over rated
Well Bush
I have your number too
**** You
This is Our Red, White, And Blue.
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-03 00:23:19]
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Re: Our Red, White, And Blue
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by MyLastBreath on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:27:57 AM AEST
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Very nice!! I enjoyed reading it. You brought up great points.
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Re: Our Red, White, And Blue
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:42:15 AM AEST
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I'll Agree Very Good Points:-)
Well Done My Friend...
Great Write....Keep Em Coming..
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Our Red, White, And Blue
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by marsh62287 on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:06:38 AM AEST
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| thats as good as it gets...great write...nothing wrong with it all...best part for sure the ending...take it easy...keep writin...later |
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Re: Our Red, White, And Blue
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by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 10:37:24 AM AEST
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I agree!! Our country isnt ours anymore .
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Re: Our Red, White, And Blue
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:45:12 PM AEST
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Yes, our country is being run by a fool, absolutely with all the court jesters right behind him. We have to put the rights of the people back into the hands of the people and out of the hands of rich zealots. This is a great write, Rylo. Good for you.
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