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My Sweet Escape
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:18:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I'm longing for a sweet escape
I'm locked inside your mind
And I have nowhere to turn
...nothing left to find
You don't know how I feel
And how I only dream of you
Your soft beautiful hands
...and everything you do
I can't stop thinking about you
My mind is racing
These tears won't stop falling
...these feelings are so displacing
Je seulement reve de vous.
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MyLastBreath
... [
2004-04-03 00:18:10]
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Re: My Sweet Escape
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:59:47 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this and I'm sure a lot of others can too, it's sweet and emotional in its pleading....so what does the last line mean? |
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Re: My Sweet Escape
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:55:10 PM AEST
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very nice write, i can also relate. nice wording. i enjoyed this. well done keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: My Sweet Escape
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:20:53 PM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa
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