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Don't know me
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:16:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Been masking my feelings
For so long it ain’t right.
I just can’t tell how I feel
Cause you don’t know me
You don’t know what it’s like
If I old what is wrong
Then I know what you would do
You would try to help me out
And to help me pull through
But you don’t know me
You don’t know what it’s like
You ask me what is wrong
And I always lie,
You don’t understand
And you don’t know why
Cause you don’t know me
You don’t know what it’s like
I’m feelin so depressed I just wanna take the knife
But I just can’t bring myself to throw away my life
You ask me bout my bruises and how I got those scars
And I will never tell you for
You don’t know me
You don’t know what it’s like
Even though you’re my friend
And I love you dearly,
I can’t let you try and help the healin
Cause you don’t know me
You don’t know what it’s like
I feel so ashamed of what I have done
It’s like being defeated even though I won
I wish I could tell you what I’ve been through
But I can’t cause
You don’t know me
You don’t know what it’s like
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2004-04-02 23:16:21]
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Re: Don't know me
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by Parrotwing on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:32:28 PM AEST
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| well said piece about the fear of breaking through |
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Re: Don't know me
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:52:24 PM AEST
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very well written....
although a little sad ......
glad to see you posting again Dizza :-)
please keep em coming..
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Re: Don't know me
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by thumper on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:16:12 AM AEST
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| Very strong emotions. I liked the way you boke it up with the two line recurring theme "you don't know me,you don't know what it's like". I notice this theme is getting to be very prevalent and it makes me sad. Oh well! I hope you get past this. Give it enough time, things will get better, they have to. |
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Re: Don't know me
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:15:30 AM AEST
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| you can never erase whats been done. thats some thing i learnt a long time ago! only i too can't let go... but you appear to be such a strong person, i'm sure you will, even if it takes time. |
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Re: Don't know me
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:25:27 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I think it might serve well as song lyrics.
stitch |
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