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Breathe
Contributed by
SmurfettOfPoems
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:52:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Losing breath when I see you
Unable to realize if your beauty is true
Tripping, falling, farther away
You seem to love me yet never say
As long as I live, im with you
Holding you while you hold me
Or shutting my eyes, just thinking of what I can't see
When your not with me I wish you are
Your presence lingers when you leave
It makes me smile, dance and want to breathe
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Re: Breathe
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:14:22 PM AEST
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this is heartwarming and beautiful.. i loved how u described everything.. WELL DONE! GRACIS SENORITA!! i dont take spanish.. i just felt like saying that lol
KEEp it ^!!* :~)
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Re: Breathe
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by MyLastBreath on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:24:56 AM AEST
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I liked it. Beautiful
Peace |
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Re: Breathe
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:02:19 AM AEST
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Good Write :-) Very Heartwarming....loved It......
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Breathe
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by TheBearPaw on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:30:57 AM AEST
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Like exhaling, huh!?! My husband says that's what he does every time he still looks at me... I like this write.. it's written in everyday language and very much appreciated. Thank you smurffett...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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Re: Breathe
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 01:38:27 AM AEST
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Nice
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Re: Breathe
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:22:05 AM AEST
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| it's very neat and sort of magical! excellent! |
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