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hidden resentment
Contributed by
angrycheerios
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 07:55:39 PM in AEST
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You better be nice to me god damn it
you dont know all ive done for you
all the past ive put behind me
to spare you from my fever
all the stifled tears
so many times ive cried beside you
and you had no idea
you better be grateful
im the best god damn thing youll ever think you have
so dont push me baby
im not afraid to make
a foolish mistake
and unleash this hidden resentment
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angrycheerios
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2004-04-02 19:55:39]
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Re: hidden resentment
(User Rating: 1 )
by TeeJay on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:05:18 PM AEST
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| Great write! Don't you feel better after you've written your feelings down? :) Imagine if we really did unleash verbally?! Whew look out! :) Great poem! |
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Re: hidden resentment
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by veruca on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:08:38 PM AEST
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Very strong!! I liked it a lot...
It showed so much power.....also haunting
kiss kiss,
veruca |
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Re: hidden resentment
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:13:35 PM AEST
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good poem.. so much anger and emotion put into thought. i luved how u wrote it.. whoever this is must not be treating u the way they r suppose to.. Hmph hmph..well anywayz.. kEEp ^ ur good wrk! i'd like to see more of ur emotions and feelings ;-)
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