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It was just a dream
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 03:24:37 PM in AEST
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As I came to the pool
With my two best friends
I saw you there
As I swam towards you
And held you tite
We were together once again
In my head as I looked at you
I thought "Ill marry you, i just mite"
As we swam together
We ignored everyone else
We slid down the slide
As you held my waste
Thinking deep down inside
That I was the girlfriend replaced
As I was under the water
You pulled my long hair back
And asked if I was okay
It didnt matter
Because for once you felt the same way
When we got out of the pool
We went to my house
I showed you around
My dad saw us together
And asked why he was around
I had no idea
I didnt know how it happened
As we went into my room I sat in my chair
As you sat next to me and smelled my hair
You kissed my neck and I never wanted to leave
How could I when you rubbed up and down my sleeve
We were in love I couldnt believe
I soon got up
And went to the bathroom
I started to scream
As I woke up and realized
It was just a dream
Sometimes when Im in my room
I look at my chair
And think that you were once there
I look at the pool
I shed tears
No one will notice
Because its water
They wont see
What really happened to me
Even though it never happened
I picture our moments together
Everywhere I go
And it hurts me still
Knowing youll never love me so
Copyright ©
xoblondiebabix3
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2004-04-02 15:24:37]
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Re: It was just a dream
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by Necromant on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:10:17 PM AEST
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Ah so sad! I think I had a Deja vu reading this! Is this a re-post? or did I dream it? Hmm It's a real sad poem! Dreams are sometimes a great pain in the @ss oops wrong word heart I ment (duh!) Awesome write!!!
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Re: It was just a dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:19:45 PM AEST
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so sad but a nice dream to hang onto.
good poem.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: It was just a dream
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by TeeJay on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:28:36 PM AEST
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| You've stirred happy and sad emotions with this wonderfully expressed poem! I believe in dreams coming true ... depending on how badly a person want it :) Great imagery, I felt as though I was there! Take Care ... |
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