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Arrogant Brutality.... (Revised)
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:46:23 PM in AEST
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Leverage and comfort on a softened bed of nails
Blunt objects strung to the ceiling impaled by things-
Mindless and motionless destructive beasts
On golden lighted wings.
Deserted café roadside corner
Blocking the entrance with his form-
Style, grace and formality
Creativity out of the norm.
Stationary devastating sense
Lacking all ability to move-
Callused and broken palms
And an egotistical reputation to prove.
Guilt free vermin and total nuisance
Responsibility lacking bravery-
Incompetence and valor decreased
Insatiable slavery.
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2004-04-02 13:46:23]
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Re: Arrogant Brutality.... (Revised)
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:15:39 PM AEST
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this was weird, yet very good as all yer stuff seems to be. I liked the first stanza the best, 'comfort on a softened bed of nails'
Very interesting picture.
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Re: Arrogant Brutality.... (Revised)
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:50:53 AM AEST
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Oh ye Hypocrites......but is there a choice.....to join among the ranks of the liars and thieves for comfort....or to remain the rebel and free.
Beautiful write. Makes one think. Thanks for sharing. |
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