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Pandemonium
Contributed by
broken-glass
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:53:23 PM in AEST
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One...
always.....
followed by another to complete the two.
I want to be nuked,
disorder in the town..
I'm inviting this pandemonium,
I just do not care.
Could not care less.
Like shimmering drops of loose tightned knots...
I want to starve myself,
right down to my bone.
I want to summon this disarray and watch myself fall apart.
I want to be drowned,
I really don't care,
I want my lungs to fill with water,
and I want you to stand and stare.
All these times,
of hurt and confusion and pain and abusion,
and yes I don't miss you at all.
I want to be saved,
right before I collapse.
Will you please break my fall
as I plunge to the ground,
I care so much when you are around,
but I don't think I'd miss you at all.
Two, minus the two.
Leaves me with nothing.
Where I began
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broken-glass
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2004-04-02 12:53:23]
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Re: Pandemonium
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:00:35 PM AEST
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| two minus the two leaves me with nothing where i began. interesting thought... x |
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Re: Pandemonium
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by Necromant on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:35:27 PM AEST
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Wow great poem! It really inspire chaos, true to its title! The wording is brilliant! Enjoyed reading it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Pandemonium
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:39:36 PM AEST
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"I want to starve myself,
right down to my bone.
I want to summon this disarray and watch myself fall apart"
I'm loving that part, or "stanza" lol
xxxx |
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Re: Pandemonium
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by jade_elephant on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:48:05 PM AEST
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i love the 'I care so much when you are around,
but I don't think I'd miss you at all.' i sometimes feel like that also. u r a great poet, please comment on mine, id like ur opinion! x
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