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I love you
Contributed by
Tripod
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've often told you that I loved you
But you'd never believe
And now I wonder why
I can't leave
Now this pain I am feeling
Is not to keen
When will your love
Come rescue me?
And now you're saying you love me
But I cannot see
I do not understand
Why you're with him and not with me
My hope right now is that you'll know
How I truly feel
Please understand that I am not angry
And that I still love you
Your smile is as beautiful
As the morning dew on the grass
And I can't explain it but this much is true
I love you
Copyright ©
Tripod
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2004-04-02 12:33:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jupiter on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:58:13 PM AEST (User
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This is really, really good. It remindes me of how my x-girlfriend acted. Keep up the good work. -Steve- |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by mickie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:22:41 PM AEST (User
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I LIKE THIS POEM VERY MUCH. IT SOUND LIKE A REAL LIFE EXPERIENCE AND I REALLY COULD IDENTIFY WITH IT. KEEP ON WRITING, YOU SEEM TO KNOW WHAT YOU ARE DOING. KEEP IN TOUCH. |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:03:47 PM AEST (User
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this is so sweet good Love poem.. its kind of sad also:( I think ive kind of felt this way... wait.. yes i have lol*~ hOpe everyins alrite! kEEp it ^!
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:13:43 AM AEST (User
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Genuine romantic love beat of a heart in want of love! Nice write & good read. Thanks for sharing.
Corinna |
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