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What would you do?
Contributed by
mercedes
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:50:35 AM in AEST
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So confused, don’t know what to do
Lost a friend today
Or shall I say…gave one up
But was it for the best?
Felt so crowded, had to break free
Turned my back on all my friends
With all my insecurities and doubts
They are better off without me
I cannot ask for forgiveness
I have asked for too much
I cannot ask for understanding
When my own thoughts are in a mess
I understand my flaws
I realize why I have no friends
Always asking for their help
Never able to give in return
At the time it seemed the right thing to do
I said goodbye and waited for a reply
A simple Why? Would of made me stay
Or at least rethink my decision
However the answer I got in return
Shows me I would not be missed
The tears came to my eyes
But did not fall, for I am strong
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-04-02 11:50:35]
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Re: What would you do?
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:10:14 PM AEST
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| ive been here, i did the same as you. lost some very special people. but in the end i realized that i was better off. i made new friends and i changed. i think it made me a better person. now...it is them that turn away...not the other way round. stay strong! *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: What would you do?
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by Necromant on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:38:33 PM AEST
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What a sad poem! My my what a problem but first admitting you was wrong and taking the blame is the first step. Try to ask for forgiveness, maybe show them this poem. (Well hope it works don't want to giva a bad advise) The poem was very well written! Best wishes!
Anne :D |
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Re: What would you do?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:18:45 AM AEST
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maybe a bit of time alone will help you go out and do the things you enjoy, i'm sure your friends if their true friends will come back to you. allthe best for the future.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: What would you do?
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:48:37 AM AEST
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Why what I do everyday.........return, return, return........and say..........I love you now lets begin again.
Very thought provoking, as are all of your words. Thank you. |
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