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Torture
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:41:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pierce your hooks, through my back
Stretch my body, on your rack
Pull my nails out, one by one
Play Russian roulette, with a gun
Flog me with, a cat o nine tails
Crucify me, with six inch nails
Burn my skin, with a red hot poker
Tighten that rope, like a choker
Run your blade, across my skin
Stab that needle, all the way in
Ask yourself, who's torturing who
No matter what, I'm not telling you
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-04-02 02:41:01]
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Re: Torture
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by parkman on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:54:03 AM AEST
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| Help meant to put this under dark poetry sorry if amoderator can help i will be most grateful |
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Re: Torture
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:43:41 AM AEST
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| I think I get the message you're trying to convey. I definitely wouldn't want to be in this kind of situation. Well-written, direct and clear. 5 stars for you ;) |
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Re: Torture
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 05:44:41 AM AEST
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| ooh! very gruesume! but good! |
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Re: Torture
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by silent on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:29:02 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, i mean i love the ending twisted, fairly deep, i love these kinds of poems, brilliant my friend, well done.
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Re: Torture
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by blueheart on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:31:10 AM AEST
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| Oo... grotesque descriptions. Truly a dark poem. |
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