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Screaming
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:48:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Standing,
Right in the middle of rush hour traffic.
As the cars swirve,
Left, Right and back again.
During all the comotion,
I remain motionless.
Suddenly,
As if brought on by another force,
I scream,
But I screamed in vain,
For the Crashing of the cars around me,
Muffled my cries for help.
But now,
MY screams are over,
For my faite and destiny were ended,
By the front end,
Of a Cadillac..
Copyright ©
intelectualpoet
... [
2004-04-02 01:48:21]
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Re: Screaming
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 03:37:38 AM AEST
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wow, this is sad but very strong write!
It definently makes a person think.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Screaming
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:49:20 PM AEST
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| Honestly a very brutal write yet so instilled with emotion that I almost shudder in fright... hopefully this is not your actual feelings.. the world is cruel but sometimes there are better things that awaits...anyway...brutal but emotionally powerful write! |
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Re: Screaming
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 05:30:57 AM AEST
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I love it, well writen!
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