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Currents of the Soul
Contributed by
coaster
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:28:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Influential skies combine with my influential rains
Fascination of time will never roll on my pains
Through the hunger one may have, its on starvation it relies
Striving on my future goals, striving for new highs
Clearings of our generation will always break the falls
The direction the wind flows is in the name at which it calls
All senses will procrastinate the illusion to touch and feel
Dreams of my sensations will continue through what's not real
The things you once did may never be able to rewind
But it's on the rain waves that relies on your mind
The water in the air will then start to seek through
The hole will lead to thoughts never knew
Never forgotten words will always be freed
But the way you take may not be the way you lead
The things you once had is all but what you need
Through the path of success is not that path to succeed
Copyright ©
coaster
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2004-04-02 00:28:42]
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Re: Currents of the Soul
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by full_blur on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:33:05 AM AEST
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| very powerful. I think you make several deep, interesting points, and I think "Never forgotten words will always be freed" is a really awesome line! |
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Re: Currents of the Soul
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:36:36 AM AEST
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Very Powerful :-)
Written very well deep interesting point's
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Currents of the Soul
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:49:21 AM AEST
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Deep and powerful words.....
Good use of metaphors..
Jenni |
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Re: Currents of the Soul
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:50:50 AM AEST
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| one of the best, if not the best, thing ive read from you. kudos. |
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Re: Currents of the Soul
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by blueheart on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:21:26 AM AEST
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| Great poem with an amazing title. I loved the metaphors, great usage of words. One of the best poems I've read all day. :) |
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