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left me for mexico
Contributed by
putteragain
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here I sit impatient
waiting for his love
water washes on windowpane
the telephone has yet to ring
and no letter have I received
my love do I wait in vain
Minutes last a lifetime
my heart it cries your name
thunder echos lightining strikes
Im reminded of what we had
before you let me waiting
with all your little tikes
Copyright ©
putteragain
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2004-04-01 18:52:19]
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Re: left me for mexico
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:15:42 PM AEST
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Putter,
I really like this! I like this best of anything I have read by you. I can picture this.
Stitch |
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Re: left me for mexico
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:34:13 PM AEST
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| Very sad Michelle. I liked the write but it was very sad. Some really good lines in this one. |
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Re: left me for mexico
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:16:21 PM AEST
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Ooooh I liked this one alot. Her and the little tikes should follow him on to Mexico where he can't stay on solo.....
Ahhhh Mexico, now thats another story...
*Sighs*
Loved your poem.... Kie |
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Re: left me for mexico
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:07:40 AM AEST
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all fiction; or very real afliction, the continuity of life and love well written, hugs n' love nessa
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