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California ( An Acrostic Poem. )
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:43:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Clear blue sky, watching the clouds as they float on by,
Aw, the smell of the beach, waves tickling my feet,
Lost within one's mind, watching the sun set as she brings in the tide,
Isn't it beautiful, just you and me, holding each other close feeling the ocean breeze,
Foam forms as the waves crash upon the shore,
Over and over the mist sprinkles the sky,
Reliving our love every time I look into your eyes,
Nothing in this world could compare to kissing you as you run your fingers through my hair,
Inner thoughts of love uncontrolled, when God made you, he broke the mould,
All of this on the California coast, man I miss home, but I miss you the most.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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2004-04-01 17:43:09]
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Re: California ( An Acrostic Poem. )
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:05:24 PM AEST
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you'll be home soon mate...hang in there. we are all with you, well not like the missus but we are all there. :-))))
God speed.
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Re: California ( An Acrostic Poem. )
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:00:07 PM AEST
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| Hang in there phantom.... Russ |
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Re: California ( An Acrostic Poem. )
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:07:42 PM AEST
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AAWW I 'm sure you do miss it but just think it will be all over soon & you can spend those days saying I'm glad to be home!
Hang in there! Christina |
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Re: California ( An Acrostic Poem. )
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:20:47 AM AEST
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Awww Matt..this is beautifully written.... Hoping you won't be writing sad poems for much longer....
HUGS from your island friend..
Jen |
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Re: California ( An Acrostic Poem. )
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:00:29 AM AEST
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| So bittersweet ... I truly hope it won't be too long before you are in her arms again ... Jan |
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